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I miss the person I never had the chance to be

 

comments = love and make my day

 

 

- Please note that this is not a song or poem and the pieces separated by the stars (*) are in no way connected. They are just lyrical tidbits -

 

 

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explain who mr. mystery is

he has a lack of history

tell me his story

tell me your tale

car crashes and bright flashes fill the air

 

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when laughter echos in empty rooms

it sounds a little hollow

 

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listen closely children

this is what infatuation does to you

burning from the inside out

leaving traces of lust and doubt

 

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If I told you I didn't care what you think

I would be a liar

Being loved and accepted by you

is my greatest desire

 

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my world came crashing down

like an old movie set

 

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Put my heart out on the line

A risk I’ve got to take for you to be mine

 

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night turns into day and

the sun rises and i still cant think of the words to say

what do i have to do to get you to stay

I’ve been tossing and turning all night long

But everything I’ve come up with has sounded wrong

 

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I miss the person I never had the chance to be

[ I don't think the person I am now would like her ]

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xo Savannah

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all words here composed by me


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Posted on 12/06/2007 5:47 PM Visits: 32
H.Ballad: 12/06/2007 6:03 PM
Gorgeous! I love the imagery!

You have such a way with words =)
Harold Bensington: 12/06/2007 6:04 PM
Wow! What a damn wonderful combination of words! =DD
tryingtofindthewords: 12/06/2007 6:08 PM
thank you! =D Rigth now they kinda just tidbits that I have to thread together with other peices.
Use Your Illusion.: 12/06/2007 6:10 PM
aww
keepxthexfaith: 12/06/2007 6:29 PM
I'm a bit tired so my cmment might not make sense lol. But yeah, that was wonderful. The last kinda confuses me though, i should go to sleep xD
Ikky-ikky-arriba!: 12/06/2007 7:19 PM
interesting, it would be great if you could link these together!
tryingtofindthewords: 12/06/2007 7:22 PM
ikkyg said:
interesting, it would be great if you could link these together!
I have pages and pages and notebooks and notebooks full of lyrics like these that I will link together and I have a few 'songs' constructed. I just decided to post some of my favorite "verses" or one lines that I like right now.
ritaa: 12/07/2007 8:27 PM
amazing
breathnowitsoverwith: 02/19/2008 12:08 AM
I have a good Picture in my head from it (if that makes any sense)
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